Loving the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ok first please write the next chapter. And secondly here's my theory Miyako IS Alice but also IS the queen's daughter.

Oh gosh this story is really good! I-no WE hope you'll be updating your story.
-3Ri.

I really love this story so far! Momo is hilarious because I rarely read any fanfics that have her cussing, Kaoru is relatable, and Miyako as Alice is something I totally agree with. I look forward to seeing the girls meet the other ruffs in person.

So I just came across this.. and I love it! The characters are interestingly done, and the plot is very unique. I love the way you write. I wonder what Boomer knows? Also will we see the other guys interact with the girls soon? Sorry I love romance xD By the way, the mystery aspect is so good! I love the way you did the queen; she's adorable. Hope you update soon!

I love this story! Everything seems interesting so far. Poor Momoko though, and Miyako, that must've been scary to see xD Also Butch is the bad guy huh~ I can't wait for the next chapter!