Great job

Muy bueno.

Wow You nerfed Hazel

Wow this has better writing than volume 5.

Yikes... your expertise in dark stories never fails to impress me, draco. I wonder how Team RWBY, and what is left of JNPR, will respond to all of this.

Good work my friend. Oh, and if you need ideas, I set up a Forum Challenge, called Arkos Child Challenge. The title meaning is obvious. If you want to take a look, or take the challenge, please let me know. Anywho, see ya later!

That...was really fucked up. Kind of wish I hadn't read it now.

I mean Adam dying was great, but the rest, what was happening to the faunus and stuff...that was messed up. x.x

Very awesome spin on things

This deserves a follow up or few more oneshots, it was nice how you built what was happening in the world(and a little scary) but absolutely captivating

Neat...repercussions...

Ever wonder what RWBY would be like If Blake's parents didn't take up retirement in Menagerie but instead joined Beacon Academy as teachers?(And man oh man would THAT shock Blake...since she did not know about their new jobs til one entered the . oh man,Cardin meeting her father would be interesting...

I like it. I remember hoping that turbo douche would get his.

Good riddance fuck that guy

Very nice. I love these short alternate ends to events in any universe. There were only slight issues with grammar and some spacing but they did nothing to distract from the tension and enticing darkness of this short but compelling narrative. Short and sweet and leaves a nice, foreboding feel. Great work.

yeah that makes sense, good story