Reviews for Welcome To Reality |
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Demented-Veto chapter 14 . 7/5 I'm atleast glad that your still going to update this at some point...right, cause honestly this story rules, and I like it(bit jealous that Monika's with David cause I've had the same fantasy) but still its a good story...my own personal feelings aside. see me on Youtube, Twitter, Wattpad and Deviantart(Nightvoxel) We can talk more it you feel like cause I invested alot of time in your story and I'd love to talk about it more. You may not consider it but we are friends now :) |
Demented-Veto chapter 7 . 7/5 Monika is best girl! |
Demented-Veto chapter 4 . 7/5 At the part where she said "You Completely and utterly failed" I was like OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! |
Demented-Veto chapter 1 . 7/5 Awsome, the description of the characters and all that was awsome! |
Trump chapter 14 . 6/19 MY DICK SMELLS LIKE PENIS |
Grommm chapter 13 . 6/19 I’m happy this is back, and I loved this chapter. I’ve got theories about what’s going on between them but I don’t care about right now since I liked the warmth of this chapter. Keep it up |
Guest chapter 14 . 9/19/2019 YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS IT'S REALLY GOOD |
Flenners fanfics chapter 14 . 8/19/2019 is there gonna be a sequal |
Light Rai chapter 14 . 8/13/2019 Ahh. It's been far too long since I've been moved like this. I believe there can be many interpretations of love but yours is so pleasing and leaves me wanting more. I really liked reading your work again. I reminded me of simpler times. I hope you find the things you're looking for and I hope you keep writing and as for critism for the story... I'm sorry I cant provide any since I'm more skilled in reading rather than editing but I can say wholeheartedly that I love it and I wish for you too continue more. |
Shad03 chapter 14 . 7/31/2019 Finally. A story I could actually review to. Been meaning to do so for quite some time now. Anyways, a somewhat big fan of your work, keep the chapters coming if you ever have the time. Have a good day |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/20/2019 thats not how you play bowling. |
True Hyper Sonic chapter 13 . 7/13/2019 I wonder what that red static was... An energy cord binding their souls, perhaps? It would make a good analogy for the Red String of Fate, if it was. David's father is going to have a great deal of difficulty trying to control those two... |
look2019 chapter 13 . 7/10/2019 Good Chapter! |
Grommm chapter 13 . 7/8/2019 One word. “Wholesome.” Love it. It did take me a little to figure out what you trying to say before they actually, but that might be my reading skills not showing it’s best. Was a good chapter anyway. |
bwburke94 chapter 12 . 7/4/2019 If this ends in goddamned Loss... |