this needs more

I loved it!
Quite interesting and engaging plot, in an intriguing format of a diarynot many authors are quite capable of handling such format, well done. Very fitting into the Ju-On franchise.
Thank you for sharing, I'll gladly return to read it again.

Sakuya-hun

Very interesting story! I actually really want kayako to speak her mind and maybe he could understand her and her pain without her killing him! great story!

I liked it. for some reason I wanted Kayako to at least talk to Charlie or give her a chance to live.