Reviews for Incomplete
Puzzler54 chapter 25 . 7/9
Fun ending. A nice change from the typical engagement or marriage epilogue. I love that they're so happy. Naughty Ginny! That would be fun to read about too though.
Puzzler54 chapter 24 . 7/9
I've absolutely loved this story. So precious. Ooh it was dramatic and touch and go between the two for a while. I loved reading H's double thinking when doing things like buying extra coffee etc. D is so sweet how he looks after her. I love the way they finally came back together. And the reading on the couch before was just too cute. I was getting butterflies!
beautyberry chapter 22 . 6/19
I hope she just drags him to the atrium and snogs him there to prove it. I love this story!
Puzzler54 chapter 9 . 6/4
Given her obsession with Malfoy's comment, I'm surprised H didn't wonder if he was the colleague Kingsley mentioned.
Hehe I love that she finally understands one thing he has told her.
I like the realism aspect of the story that things don't go perfectly: eg the bill had some tough questions and stubborn views, wasn't easy to get through and requires more work before finished. Excited to read more tomorrow!
Great story.
Puzzler54 chapter 8 . 6/4
I know he doesn't help himself, but I do feel a bit sorry for Malfoy at the end. And impressed he clearly is keen if he's putting up with her stroppy stubborn deafness when it comes to some things he is saying.
Really enjoying this story. Great start - I liked the harsh start between the two which has brought them to the unresolved tension. Clever idea to cause a barrier between them and that they had been so close.
serpents-entwined chapter 17 . 6/2
Love your story so far! I really hope Draco succeeds in making the new and improved Wolfsbane. I also think their relationship is developing at a perfect pace. And the comment about Draco 'pouring a mean bowl of cereal' is hilarious! I would change maitre d to maƮtre d', as that is its correct form. Other than that, well done!
Stephanie O chapter 25 . 5/17
I'm so glad thibgs worked out for Hermione and Draco! Such a refreshing change for him to see smiles directed at him instead of n
applelam145 chapter 25 . 5/3
Loved this
I'm A Sucker For Love Stories chapter 25 . 5/1
After reading this the whole afternoon, I have to thank you for making such an intricate and interesting plot! I look forward to more of your dramione works :)
mimbulus-mimbletonia chapter 25 . 4/28
Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading, and also that for the first time I think in a fanfic that I've read, you've actually put across times where the men might struggle a bit in the bedroom, but not only that, but that it doesn't then go on to define the relationship. It was honestly refreshing, and a really nice- and adult- take on the beginnings of a relationship.
Thanks again for giving me a day of contentment reading :)
magiemae chapter 25 . 4/23
Great story. I loved it.
Sofy2011 chapter 25 . 4/22
Thank you baby i love it so much
Sofy2011 chapter 13 . 4/22
Omg poor Draco
Pjyenn chapter 25 . 4/19
I love the way u portray Draco character.. exactly what I had in mind of him in situation like this.. amazing fic I love it
BXgirl chapter 25 . 4/17
Like how you captured camaraderie between characters.
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