hope this continued... its interesting I love stories where RWBy ends up on another World and I've Read a few RWBY-StevenUniverse stories before (sadly most are unfinished) and honestly this particular crossover just ...works for some reason (and not just because of Ruby's exceedingly coincidental name either lol )

You're righting was good for the first few chapters what happened?

I'll be blunt this story is... Bad.

The plot is weird. I really don't understand it at all so that makes things bad already.

The dialogue is jumbled up badly. You need to space it out more evenly and sometimes the characters are OOC.

You need to seriously rewrite this entire thing, to be honest cause to me. It looks like a jumbled mess.

Look at other fanfics to get a good idea of what I mean. For example. Look at the fanfic called Professor Arc and you will see his writing style. That is something you need to strive for or at least take examples from it.

Ok, PLEASE tell me they’re going to sing it’s over isn’t it? Can they be all like why is everyone singing? And then Pearl starts singing and they’re like crap, this just got sad! Also, PLEASE let them react to some Ruby Sapphire cuteness. This looks good

I can't wait for the next chapter

Yay this was a fun chapter!

Well... Ruby(Rose) finally knows what a Ruby(gem) looks like

Oh I can't wait to see team rwby and jpnr reaction to white diamond

fun story hope to see it continue, especially with real ruby showing up

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I LOVE THIS IDEA SO MUCH! XD

I can't wait to see how this unfolds. I especially can't wait to see how Ruby and friends will react to see Garnet unfusing. And with Seeing Gem Rubies. :D

Update soon.

I liked the chapter!

I like the idea of it

How about you have a fight between Garnet and Yang Xiao Long. (Sorry if I misspelled Yang's name.)