ok, I just wanted to let you know that this story has inspired me to write my first ryou and malik pairing story! XD It's a ygo crossover and I'll give you the name when I get it written.

wow, this story is kinda old. when it was being written I was still waking up to watch the dub in years before I had to go to gymnastics halfway through the episode. THat always made me so sad. TT

GODS YOU NEED TO FINISH! I love it and I wanna read more! *hands out cookies to author and other reviewers* COOKIES!

Aiie! Favorites list, for sure!

Hey darl, I've just re-read your fic, Seriously, Are you ever planning on continuing? You haven't updated in over a year x.x

I absolutly LOVE this story! I've re-read the chapters about over a hundred times. It's one of my all-time favorite stories. I can't wait for you to update/revise it. _

Stay Frosty!

~L.B.-chan

PS: Fenburt loves your story too! _

i love this fanfic, can't wait for the rewritten version, though the rewritten version tends to lose somethings mentioned in the original, and writing styles change. anyway this story was the one that turned me on to the whole otogixjou pairing, i was so happy reading it, because that pairing is so hard to find. then i reread the story and noticed the an about how you may change it to setoxjou later on...PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DON'T DO IT! don't get me wrong, i like the setoxjou pairing, really i do, but everywhere i turn SETOXJOU, SETOXJOU, SETOXJOU! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, PAIR HIM UP WITH SOMEONE ELSE! its like no one wants him to be paired up with anyone else. he's almost always, in pretty much EVERY fanfic paired with seto, and while it is nice sometimes i rather see him paired up with someone else. for crips sake, other than seto he's usally paired with mai (which is really rare counting all those yaoi fanfic writers) and yugi/yami. which seems somewhat sick. yugi's just like thsi little kid, but it's not as creepy as the yugixyami pairing, for some reason i like ever other yamixhikari pairing, except this one, who knows why. anyway otogi's pretty much always paired with honda so thsi pairing is pretty much really really hard to find, and then you actually have to find a fanfic with them that you actually like the story of. it's depressing. i mean come on, just let it reast every once and a while. everytime i click on a fanfic, there's setoxjou (okay maybe not everytime, but most of the time) it just (starts screaming) okay, sorry , i just had to let all that out. (sigh) i guess it won't be the worse thing in the world if he ends up with seto, but i really really tired, and i finally found a fanfic with them together only to find he might end up with seto anyway (sigh) starts to stress a person out. not to mention all my other stupid issues. actually i feel better. too bad i already signed in, now you know who this crazy person is. XP. good luck with your fanfics and life, (deep sigh) at least malikxryou won't change, and thanks for listening (or scimming) through this review, just chalk it up to all the gum i keep chewing. gum does wierd things to the brain i've realized. ja.

o.o *giggles insanely at the entire story* I love it! Although the notes can be a little distracting, I like them.

Oh yes, I loved this quote (it was pure genius!):

"Hell may hath no fury like a woman scorned, but even that pales in comparison to a protective lover with a Keyblade"

X3 keep up the comedy work in here!

Uwai~! When wil you update! I really want to see what happens. And Yami No Malik! [Spaarklesparkle] Forgive me, but I really love YnM! (As absurd as it may sound!). What is he after? Malik? And I want to claw out Riku and Sora's eyes. Because they think Malik is the cause. Grr.

So... *look scrutinizingly* Are you ever going to update? Hm? I've been waiting foerever! *pout* update *stomp foot childishly* I wanna know what's going to happen!

I'd just desperately like to point out that there is no spirit in the Sennen Rod. As I can't be bothered to explain why myself, here is a link:



Such a mistake would usually have me running away from the 'fic in horror. However, I'm going to stick with this one, as I am dying to know what will happen! The fact that I still love this 'fic proves that it is very well written. Yay! A side note: Malik x Ryou is my favourite couple, so yay! again

Well, I hope the rewriting is going well. And I guess the rewriting explains the new chapter titles? See, I first found this fic on - was only up to Chapter 5, and hadn't been updated since April 2003. 0.0 I was really glad to find it on with 9 Chapters.

Notes:

Candle - I hereby nominate you for Best Use Of An Inanimate Object As A Character

Mokuba - Ah, well, depending on which anime you watched, or if you read the manga - and how far along you were, yeah, age can be confusing for any of them. But he's always been five years younger than Seto. Which explains why he's only an inch taller than Yugi (including hair). In the Japanese show, Seto is 18, two years older than the others; in the American dub, he's also 16, and the youngest since he was born in October.

Chapter Length - I, too, like the idea of a story where the chapters get proressively longer, but I personally prefer more frequent updates with shorter chapters. So, even if the next chapter you're rewriting isn't longer than 9, you could still post and make every very happy.

Computers - Hope yours manages not to get sick again.

Story Itself - I think brilliant is a good word to describe it. Fabulous, amazing, 'Damn, I wish I could write like that' also work.

Duh, duh,Duh. I'm Lovin' It. Sorry I just love that song and thought it approprate for what i think about this story. it is really good and update soon. Kay. _

_ Twas good as always. Except some of the KH stuff was sort of lost on me... Considering I've never played the game... but I do have a Sora obsessed friend. _ So I know a lil bit about it...
The thing about the cat stealing Marik's keys had me in a stitch. Choked on Root Beer x_X *note to self: never drink pop while reading fics ever again... you think I'd have learned from the time I got Lemon Coke on my ctrl key .* Those two (Malik and the cat) are really out to get eachother though... Can imagine now, Tabito using Malik's sock drawer as a litter box.
*pokes* I hope you update soon. _ And I hope that school won't kill you. I survived physics class... but barely... so you can survive school in general.
~Taryn~
ps: grapes in the microwave will explode.

AH I'm so sorry I haven't reviewd! ;-; *starts freaking out like Ritsu Sohma from Fruits Basket*
Faye: *pokes Taryn in the side and she collapses to the ground* ... she's no longer allowed her Fruits Basket DVDs. .
*coughs* well, to make up for not reviewing I'm leaving you two. I was going to review earlier... back when this was first posted but ff.n was being a bitch (like usual...) and then I forgot x_X
Well, it was hillarious. *grins* Especially when Yami no Bakura and Yami no Yugi were making out. And I'm just as much of a morning person as Ryou. U Some mornings I threaten to bite my sisters... *cough* no wonder they don't like talking to me in the morning.
And flattery is my middle name. *gets card from a random person* Ok... actually it's Elizabeth... but what do I care?
~Taryn~