I loved this. :) But poor Allura.
Kinda makes you question the Garrison a bit too. What does Keith know?! Tell us pardner.

Oh wow I loved this so much! I hated the cliffhanger though. Please please please make another part! You are an amazing author!

Umm... part 2 please! Hahaha don't leave it off with this cliffhanger! Ah, a beautifully written story. :) I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing!

I saw this on your blog and decided to give it a read- and I am so glad I did! This is a great AU, and I love how you handled the relationships between the characters. Deaf Allura was a cool addition, too! I hope you do decide to post a part two- I know I'll be bookmarking this for future reads! Thank you so much for sharing!

OH my cheese I am destroyed. This was amazing, I love it so much.

- AVeryPassiontePerson

I gotta punch a fucking wall to feel tough again
fuck
this is so good
ohmygod

Okay, I LOVE this! What’s next?! Ahhh! This was great! Wonderful story, wonderful build between shiro and Allura! Thanks for sharing and I hope to hear more!

What! No! Keep going! Thus can't just dangle!

you know i didn't believe you when you said there was no cliffhanger but there is and i hate you for it. good grief, my dude. anyway, loved the concept that you expanded on and i know dragon will love this piece if she hadn't told you already!

OMG I loved it so much!