I only started reading this fanfic today and I absolutely loved it until this chapter (ch 11) and my hope is that you will highly consider rewriting this or maybe you could seek out another well established author to help out with this story or the rewrite.

Naruto sounded quite stupid here. Kakashi is a ninja, so it is normal to infer he got burned in the line of duty or something. Asking his family makes him sound stupid for not making such a deduction.
It would have been better if he said 'why do I detect traces of mana on him' or something and thus Karna can say it is residue from his mana burst.

Makes sense he isn't 'friends/rivals' with kiba as canon (which is weird seeing how much of an asshole kiba is in the chuunin exams). I like hinata, but I too get sick of her pairings, not to mention I think it would be interesting if you talk about her background here a bit more. I don't hate hinata, but I hate her family of incestuous slavers (who fucking makes slaves of their own family?!) and how her father is forgiven for being an asshole. Like seriously? THAT was how he was redeemed? He was a shitty father in canon.

Very interesting. I dislike how one dimensionally the characters are written, but well they ARE stupid assholes who villainize children (garra!) so I can't say it's unexpected behavior.
No, but I do have an issue with karna. It's kinda stupid to reveal your name, stupid. And calling himself a heroic spirit to the kyuubi also sounds weird. Like why? I get saying that to naruto if he is going to explain the situation, but as a greeting it's quite weird.
Anyways, demiservant naruto with ANTIDIVINE attribute (which includes the hyuuga and uchiha clans as they bear divine blood no matter how thin it may be, well not that thin with the inbreeding) sounds so cool. I'm interested in the direction.

Look on the upside, at least you're noticing your mistakes, bit uer me warn you that the second you try to do any correct writing us the second your story will never be reviewed. The Naruto community has wanted over the years and has become shallow; you're more likely to get a silent audience that barely reviews when you write something that actually has thought put into it.

If it doesn't have the following tropes: Harems, godlike, OP, neglect,going to another Universe and dominating it while the plot goes nowhere, then your story won't be popular since the community has been known to be shallow. So, be sure to follow them down if you want reviews because other writers on this site that don't write that stuff get ignored by the edgy teenagers that want their fantasies to come true.

Please Author-Sama keep this story up

My lord Author-Sama please tell me this is not a gayship please I beg you.

I would like this story to stay please.

Please keep this story up. I love this story ️. It's rare to find a Naruto karma storyline.

What! Your gonna delete this story ..I'm so disappointed ...I really like reading this only to be discontinued

read your every chapter in a day this is a good idea keep up the good work

Man I kinda want a harem of some girls from fate and naruto-verse

I hope for Joan X naruto he needs a true romance not a fake ass one based on the people of your fanfic or maybe artoria X naruto X Joan that be hot.

I kinda still wanna read this every once in a while as of now. I still find it good but, i did notice the holes you made while writing this.

please have the replacement up before you delete it I would very much like to follow it as soon as it is up