I like it, I hope it continues

I would suggest you actually wait until you have a decent chapter in mind to post instead of just posting these filler chapters to let people know your alive. We can wait a little longer for a decently written chapter instead of confusing dialogue only filler.

Wow, three such chapter in a row. Are you going to post an actual understandable chapter or are these utterly confusing dialogue chapters with no context the new norm?

I really like this can't wait for more!

This is pretty good! I really like this, and I hope to read more!

I hope you release the next chapter soon I want to know what happens next

Love the way this story is heading. Please update soon.

Gotta admit, Jaune's got balls of steel. No way in hell can Jaune suck at something that he's been training for years. All this time, he was either meant to find the Grey or life just threw a bone at him for once.

Y'know, I've read a lot of stories about Jaune and some other characters being neglected and given up by their family but it never gets old on how painful it is to see the protagonist in such pain. It just hurts when a father gives up on his own son and starts doubting if he really is connected to the family by blood.

One of the best stories that I've read so far. Jaune is powerful but not too OP in my honest opinion. He's still an awkward kid that's just a bit too popular right now. But it's funny how Pyrrha reacts to it. I hope you update soon

(Ran out of room on the last comment, look at the one below this for the start of my advice)
Another criticism of yours was an OP main character and believe it or not, there are ways to handle that smoothly. What you don't want to do is have Jaune become stronger and scale his enemies up with him, this makes the fighting part of the story become redundant and boring. Another don't is giving him all of these powers but giving him one mortal weakness, it looks stupid and can be a turn off for a lot of potential fans of your story. A good way to go about this could be to have him be strong physically and Grey Knight power wise, but also give him doubts and mental weaknesses all people have. Basically, you can have him become a badass, just don't make him into a stone faced professional master fighter with complete confidence in himself and his abilities, that's not really Jaune and from what I've read you don't want to write him like that either. These are all my own opinions, if you listen to them or not I still think your story is amazing, keep it up! :)

Too many people underestimate the importance of dialog, you don't need a fight every chapter to keep interest in your story. Remember, we came here for your take on the characters of RWBY (or at least I did) and what you would do with them. And about that Jack guy's review, character growth is important and while explaining every thing may seem appealing and an easy route to take, it wastes content you could have put into your story and is an easy plot trap to fall into. I'm not saying putting in a guide was a bad move, I'm just saying that if most of the things about the powers and legacy are explained it takes out that important building element of the story and leaves you with an OP Jaune and nothing else plot wise.

dude plz tell me ur making chapter 11 into a full story

Hola escritor soy de esos pocos lectores que leen tu fic utilizando el Google translate como sea
Me encanta tu fic es de los pocos años que le encuentro el sentido argumental y no otro de (soy jaune me volví OP por qué soy el protagonista)tengo una duda los ojos de jaune siempre fueron heterochromatic o solo después de haberse encontrado con los blancos?

extremely well written chapter. You had me with every word. I wonder how you'll make velvet reason for not fighting back especially since her semblance is down right op... I swear i don't get rooster teeth make so much new characters only to throw them away...