Reviews for Malfoy's Muggle |
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![]() ![]() cn u update pls btw i like this storyb |
![]() ![]() I think they have a procedure for people who don’t want blood many people decline it due to an issue of religion |
![]() ![]() You are killing us. Pls update |
![]() ![]() ![]() And it gets juicy :) One request, if you could separate the dialog from paragraphs, it would make for an easier read. Other than that, keep going. Need some more Draco action. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More, please. Another nicely done hot scene. I like how you describe her reactions to the wizarding world. I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter a lot :). I hope Draco won't be a jerk to her after this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK. This scene was hot. |
![]() ![]() You haven't abandoned this, have you? Hope not! |
![]() ![]() When is the nxt chap. coming mam, cant be more patient mam...hurry up mam...bdw hows US mam! |
![]() ![]() Hi mam,, why hav u stopped writing...eagerly waiting fr d nxt chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ...and they kissd! Nd it cudnt b betr dan d way u just brought them that close that soon...beautifully done! |
![]() ![]() Finally...the love interest arrives. So happy to finally see the start of a love story (hopefully). Waiting for the next chapter eagerly. Xoxoxox |
![]() ![]() The ending containd me agan...bring on d nxt one soon! |
![]() ![]() Cervical cancer...that was an interesting turn. I have to tell you...this chapter didn't feel like it was written by a rookie. So, good going . Although I would love to see more of harry if you could please. Thanks for the lovely chapter. Waiting for the next one. xoxo |
![]() ![]() That's one interesting story u cant leave in between now,,,a nice start...keep updating! |