NVM I read the first 3 chapters of the other story... It seems you copied the story and just changed a few things. One being taking out Bill but you forgot to change it in some areas he was mentioned, and a few other things you changed like Harry's wand you changed to a Katana.

interesting so far but one thing has bothered me more than others... You've thrown in a twin somewhere sometimes... Who the hell is Bill? O.o also I wish you would update

wish you would update it

Please update this is a good story

it's to bad that you abandoning this story since it's really good and i'm enjoying it

Update the damn fic man

Update fic man.

Yeah i want to lay low to avoid attention but i just blast a troll sure~~.

Lol the date for katana is seriously weird :3

Bahahahahahaaha a European wizard from 3000 years ago using a Japanese katana for a sword 2000 years before katanas was even invented. Your fangirl is showing through.

bro, update the fic. please

This is an amazing story and I have read it through multiple times I truly hope a new chapter comes out soon!

Please update. I can’t lie, the sexual tension between Harry and Lily is some of the most I have ever seen.

please update

just some quick things here, one is he apparently had to introduce himself to the other gryffindors twice, and the next thing is he has already changed things and caused ripples, he cant rely on his old knowledge about things remaining the same, and finally the grammar is kind of bad tbh, other than that it looks good and needs to be updated