It’s just wow great

Wow... I notice the subtle references to Monika After Story, and protag subtly referring to mods! This is incredible for a one-shot fic!
The protag isn't the most popular character, so to see you giving him this level of depth... and making him a pitiable person... Well done!

Pretty interesting take on Monika, actually. I haven't seen Monika be this all powerful (or that might be just me and my limited choice of fics to read) in any other media before.

I'd love to see what could come out of your writing if you did one of these, but from Monika's viewpoint!

Aw shit fam sorry, i feel for you. My BOI but you have a source of anime tiddies right next to you fam.

If this is only a one-tine story, then it's the best damn one I've seen. Honestly, I don't know how to set up a second chaoter for this, unless something happens or it's from Monika.

Very nice, really good.

this really gives me the feels! about how the protag point of view. nice!

I'm gonna call ya, my dear protagonist friend, Protag!