Very good! Made me laugh and cry and made me happy! Please continue.

Please hurry up with another chapter...this is soooooooo good

Sweet such a cool concept! Please update soon xx

This was great and thanks for the mention, it made me smile!

Hi, I really enjoy the idea of this fic, but the mistakes really bothered me while reading... I saw on the reviews that someone offered to help you with that and I believe you could benefit from said help.
Anyway, keep writing!

Your grammar and spelling is terrible.

This was amazing. Also, I am not currently listed as a full beta reader but if you want I could help you with yours. The only reason I am not listed as I beta reader is actually that I am not active due to working on my own reasons and I had previously deleted my stories off of the sight but I was enrolled as one once. Anyways if you want I could help you and help fix your grammar or spelling (since they're actually my strong points) and anything else. If you don't want to, I can completely understand.

Oh, the cliffhanger... I look forward to your next update this story and well done on this one! I love the little backstory with Killian and the way she is showing her affection to children! As well as how realistic it would be that she would try to run away from the King's Court not wanting to be handed back over.

This was interesting and I look forward to the next chapter! My only question is when it will be updated and if there isn't a regular updating process, you don't have to answer! Anyways I loved it.