| Reviews for Brushfire |
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   ndjjdjsujsj chapter 4 . 7/2 Please update this fabulous story |
| KingAllen chapter 4 . 10/10/2019 Keep OFA he’s have OFA is literally descriptions of this Fic because one reviewer think shouldn’t have doesn’t mean you have to follow his wish it your story not him/her |
| creativesm75 chapter 4 . 8/16/2019 cool |
| OvErActiVe-InSoMniAc chapter 2 . 7/28/2019 Buddy, you got a great idea here that can be made into an amazing story. Don't drop this one, also you gotta fix (more than) some typos in it. To quote one, her 'hind' had been preoccupied with a slew of various other things. " I am pretty sure you meant mind here... Because if you didn't, then the meaning of this statement is inappropriate at best, not to mention hilarious. |
| Arrow3ss chapter 4 . 6/28/2019 Midoriya's fire quirk seems to be stronger than Shoto's (or Shoko in this story) here but I say keep OFA still. Maybe just don't include the multi-quirk aspect of it. |
| MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 3 . 4/15/2019 Nah, keep it. He'll need OfA soon. |
| MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 2 . 4/15/2019 Foul, not fowl, personality. Fowl is a bird, foul is something negative. |
| MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 Izuku's dad is named Hisashi. Not Hisashe. Hisashe is technically impossible to spell with hiragana or katakana (no "she" hiragana or katakana), so it would be a foreign name to the Japanese. Hisashi is not impossible to spell. Also, the meaning and puns in the name would be lost. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2019 Well for getting rid of one for all I would have to ask if it deku is going to be using it much in the first place. If he is just using it to do minor boost I dont see a point in having it just boost his physical capabilities. Now if he later on going to beable to Detroit smash left and right then keep it. I look forward to reading more. Till the next one. |
| FlamingSkyDragon chapter 4 . 3/27/2019 I haven't really seen that many fics with Ibara in 1A, probably cuz she was paired with someone else, but Reiko is a nice change of pace. I understand your reasoning for replacing Mineta, honestly if Aizawa said he has potential, then who are we to argue eh? If you think you're unable to do his mighty grape-ness' justice, then I'll believe you. Honestly I prefer OfA on Deku than anyone else, just doesn't feel right otherwise. |
| LawlessWriter chapter 3 . 3/27/2019 Dammit! FF doesn’t let me use symbols in comments. Izuku (Heart) Shoko Izuku (Diamond) Katsuki Izuku (Club) ? Izuku (Spade) Himiko? |
| LawlessWriter chapter 4 . 3/27/2019 Izuku 3 Shoko Izuku Katsuki Izuku o8 ? Izuku 3 Himiko? |
| BluePhoenixStorm chapter 4 . 3/26/2019 I love how you included Reiko, simply because she seems like a super cool character and i don't see enough of her. Hope to see more of this as you upload new chapters! |
| TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 4 . 3/26/2019 I'd say keep it in by start thinking about how the quirks interact. |
| Xerzo LotCN chapter 4 . 3/26/2019 i like izuku having ofa so i enjoy him continuing to have it and the combos and extra quirks is interesting so interesting with the family for now its fine i guess i was expecting the battle chapter then cliffhanger bummer i had stopped before it got fully going and i came back and it just ended |
