Dude, this is pure garbage.
It's very clear that you know nothing of Fate

Love it.

Awesome job with this story. You should make an epilogue to this story.

Look man I tried but I really couldn't even finish the first chapter. The English language has been butchered here, also your sentences are a bit plain. If you rewrote this and varied your sentence types and added a bit more description and the like you'd be much better off

What boring trite garbage.

More fucking chapters ya numbnuts

Type your review here.a useless naruto a pappet hshaha weaklinf naruto useless

Well, that was quite amusing now I find it amusing that Mordred calls him daddy while having sex but it's kind of amusing can't have another one lol.

Well, that was quite entertaining would be nice to read some of the lemons but there are so many

Well, that was kinda amusing glad that Hyuga's not with Naruto I can't stand her at all and never will anyways Gil kicked ass again man was quite amusing

Well, that was interesting some nice women there I was expecting Nobunaga but maybe she joins later on, but dammit why bring that stalking skank Hyuaga into the story, I was glad he wasn't in that world anymore, I guess I'll just skip everything she says or does like she doesn't even exist which she shouldn't anyways, would have been fine with Sakura Haruno or Ino but her gross, well whatever wonder what happens next

Well, that was amusing Gilgamesh is pretty cool, adding Nobunaga is awesome would love it if u added Mordred also but if not that's OK.

Well, this was interesting shame Mordred's not in the harem

Well, that was interesting if not kind of confusing some nice babes there though

You've butchered the English language here and there.
You should have used shorter sentences and employed punctuation.
Finally, there's almost no distinction between the narrative and the dialogue.
If you made these corrections, I think you would get 50% more favs and follows, if not double.