This chapter is seriously adorable! It's so perfect! And you write really well!

That was fun, and I feel you captured the characters' personalities well :)

Great!

Hello there!

I really liked it :) Being a swimming instructor myself this fic was especially cute and hit right home with me. I've always assumed that Sector 45 is equipped with a pool, considering the soldiers are required to help out on the ships in the harbor sometimes. It would be such a waste of soldiers if they'd fell into the water by accident :P

Though I am slightly (sadistically) dissappointed that Juliette didn't choke on water/got water in her nose even once, something bound to happen for a first time swimmer. Especially when you make her practice proper crawl breathing, that's some high level stuff right there!
I'd love to read more of your fanfics in the future!

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Cupcake

YES THIS WAS GREAT! Keep writing!