I pmed you.

Please update destroyed from the inside!

So Anakin and Ahsoka went back to Geonosis at some point? Huh, did you make that up or is a part of the clone wars expanded universe?

Also, your author's notes are super funny. :)

Great update

So at one point Ahsoka assisted Obi-Wan and fought Maul on Mandalore? Neat! I haven't seen that much of Star Wars: Rebels, so I never really got the full story of what happened after Mandalore's civil war. Did the Republic decide to intervene at all in your version or did she just help Obi-Wan out for old times sake?

I'm getting a little ahead of myself; "The Lawless" is my favorite episode of the whole series not to mention the conclusion of my favorite arc, so forgive me if I'm focusing too much on a minor plot point.

Back to more major plot elements, this more stoic and damaged Ahsoka is an interesting take, I wonder how or if the choices she'll make are affected significantly in any way by your interpretation. Ahsoka clearly has feelings for Riyo and you portray this well; it is interesting how Ahsoka doesn't really do anything all that sexual with Riyo, mostly it's about being touched and relieving tension. I really hope Riyo gets out of this life and takes off with Ahsoka at some point, which is emblematic of how Ahsoka doesn't really feel she can be vulnerable or open with anyone, and I truly hope they find happiness with one another.

Man, I feel so sorry for anyone who shipped Ahsoka and Barriss prior to the Season 5 finale - most fans like me were pleased to see this character show up at all, and the latter turned out to be such a monster. After all, seeing Ahsoka form a connection with a girl her age was really refreshing; we never really get much of a look into Ahsoka's life on a daily basis as a teenager/young adult growing up in the jedi temple or personal history other than the fact that it's somehow connected to Plo Koon. Do you have any of those you've written or can recommend?

Keep up the good work!

My reaction to the first part of this chapter, '-'

It’ll be interesting to see how Riyo and Ahsoka figure stuff out now that the cat’s out of the bag! Hope their blooming relationship can survive. Will we ever see the two seal the deal? Will Riyo turn out ok in the end? Keep ‘em chapters coming!

Yay amazing chapter I loved it

Good chapter :)

Spicy chapter

Good chapter!

Great chemistry as usual between Riyo and Ahsoka. Appreciate the shout-out, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Amazing
I really like this and appreciate your work :)

So cute!

Amazing chapter! I love it!