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More please.

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That was fun.

Alright, done with everything you've posted for now. Few critiques.

For starters, I feel like you've got a solid grasp on everyone's characters for the most part, and the new interactions between Izuku and 1-B are pretty solid thus far. And Kendo x Izuku is a ship that I honestly don't see much of, so I'm curious to see how it goes.

Now, regarding Chapter 2...honestly, the whole situation seemed out of character for the two. Not so much Aizawa-he's always been an unorthodox teacher willing to bend his lesson plan occasionally. But Bakugo attacking Izuku like that is weird, considering that, unless I'm forgetting something, he never attacked him outright, or in such a violent fashion, when he was literally right next to him in canon during that exercise. While I can kind of get Izuku sticking up for him, the suggestion of straight up fighting the teacher is...no. A guy like Izuku would not suggest that, especially with next to no combat experience on his end. I suppose in the end, it doesn't really impact the story that much going forward, but, judging from other reviews, it's definitely left a bad taste in some readers' mouths. Just, look at it as a learning experience in how to improve your storytelling.

Another thing from I think chapter 4-5? Nobody knows about Stain(well, unless you count Volume 2 of the Vigilantes spin off manga) at this point, so just-him being at USJ at all should probably be retconned unless you've got a good explanation for his presence.

Finally, just a personal nitpick, feel free to disregard, but I never understood why people tag ships in their fics. I get that this is filed under "Romance," but outright saying that the "person who lights a different kind of fire in him" or whatever the hell is so-and-so character feels...cheap, almost. Like it cheapens the natural development of the ship and the story because you *know* that some kind of relationship is gonna develop between the two characters-might not stick, but it'll develop nonetheless. As a reader of stories, I can personally tell you that the writing on its own is usually enough to point readers in the right direction, and honestly, they love guessing. It's a mystery, and the fact that it isn't 100% known until the very end keeps them reading and wishing for more. Idk, just a weird thing I've never gotten about these kinds of fics.

All in all, it's got some rough edges, but I see potential here. You can work with this, and you'll only get better with time. Looking forward to seeing more.

...Hopefully at a more regular interval. Don't worry-I know your pain way better than I like to admit, haha.

Actually, Katsuki being expelled is what no one would have seen coming... mostly because authors can't seem to bring themselves to actually do it.

keep up the AMAZING WORK!

I Wonder what will happen in CLASS 1-B during the events of the USJ Invasion!

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great job on the fanfiction. can't wait to see more.

Outstanding chapter

What a nice story

Yo this is pretty neat my guy.

Oh my gosh I cant wait for more

Yessss! Love this deku!

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