Please continue it really nice story want to know more what happens.

Great as it is in idea and writing; I feel that there's a large lull in the story. Once everyone gets into konoha it seems like the story slows and has less significance.

what happened to sirius grandfather? why isn't he moving with them? did I miss something?

Are you okay? Reading this story again, continuing to love it! Missing it

I would love to see more of this absolutely fascinating story, it kept me up til 2 am reading all of it. And that's a mean feat. It's very well written and quite captivating with great pacing. I'd really like to know if Ayame finds her animagus form or if she gets in contact with the snake summons as spoils going after orochimaru. I love what you are doing please update soon

This is an amazing story. love the strong family aspects of it. Sirius is hilarious.

I would so love to read more of this fascinating story. Thank you for your amazing fantasy.

a very interesting story, thank you, please more

Yeas!

I don't weather to be happy or sad

Aweee that's so cute

That. Is is amazing!

Aw man

I love where this is going

Ohhh