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Is it an Aparoid? but it's supposed to appear a year after Fox met Krystal.

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I loved this story, that scene where Fox and Krystal had to get naked in the shower together was so funny. You have a real talent for humor. I also enjoyed when Fiora handed those guys in the bar their butts. That was awesome. Another scene I enjoyed was when Fox was feeling jealous of those guys staring at Krystal when they first landed on Corneria. I love a jealous Fox McCloud, just wish you’d done more with that particular scene. I also really liked when Pinky attacked Falco. And of course, I loved the ending where Krystal talked to her mother about wanting to take Fox as a mate and then went and interacted with Fox. In general, I love any scene you write with Fox and Krystal together. Keep up the good work.

Consigned to oblivion! Hah! That's a BOTW reference! And thank you for such a comprehensive description of psionics, it's thanks to you that I am so good at writing about mind powers. You are truly amazing, and someday I hope that my stories will be good enough to be worthy of being mentioned in the same breath as yours. I know I may seem to be lathering it on a little thick, but words truly cannot describe how awestruck I am at your skil. Forever with my love, Archer out.

WHOOOOO! I've been wanting to review your stuff for the longest time! The reason for my inability? Technical difficulties. We all know the struggle, am I right? But on to the review. First off, your grammar is perfect. I am always elated to find an author who actually gives a quiznak about their English, because let's face it, there are FLUENT ENGLISH SPEAKERS who write as if they're a bunch of Chinese and Russian first-timers who speak in broken English. And your plot! Oh, mah, fuh-reaking gawsh! Your plot is BEAUTIFUL! The character development, the dialogue, the emotions, the delivery! I'm practically in tears! You, my friend, are my ultimate idol in the fan fiction community. You have a level of professionalism that I've seen very few other fanfic authors achieve, this book is so unmatchedly sublime in its wonderfullness-ocity (ran out of fancy words) that it deserves to be published in hardcover! I've been an avid fan of yours for about a year, and I hope that you continue writing for a long time to come. So, my dear general with fur of alabaster, I proudly declare my love of your work, as well as your impact upon my personal image of myself as a writer. I love Voltron: New Defenders/Legendary Defender, Legend of Zelda, and very certainly Star Fox, and I am a proud member of the furry fandom. I eat a bag of Cheese-its to your health. Long live General Whitefur! Archer out.

Not bad. But I was hoping these last two chapters would have more of Fox getting to know his in-laws. I never see enough fanfics like that.

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Congratulations on completing such a nice and lovely story.

Awesome ending,

I can't wait to see one fic where Krystal's family & her brother in-law go to Corneria when Krystal gives birth to sextuplets?

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Dear lord this has been a fun journey! I don't really have anything negative to say about this, as usual. You're writing is a bit of an inspiration to me, as a budding author who's to shy to post anything!

Keep up the good work, I say, and I look forward to reading more of your works!

I really hope this Yarus guy spends the rest of his disgraced, miserable existence learning just how wrong he was to believe in a madman like Andross.

A much fitter fate than dying with dignity.

You're late. Please update or you'll be demoted to colonel whitefur.

amazing chapter

Be prepare for sappiness and embarrassment of Fox McCloud.