A good story.

Ive said this for Angry Harry and the Seven and I'll say it for this story too... Your endings and epilogues are legendary... They are beautiful, heartwarming, and all around packed with powerful emotion... I personally have a hard time connecting to my feelings, and I usually feel a bit hollow inside, but your epilogues fill me to the bursting point. They are magnificent and I love them for it. That said I am now going to go and, YET AGAIN, try to tackle that monster Harry Potter and the Daft Morons. XD

Oh my god I almost teared up at the ending wow that was beautiful.

a beautifully touching end to a very well written story,

thanks for sharing

I'm extremely impressed, and that till the end. Wonderful work, thank you.

What a lovely story. It just made me feel good. Thanks.

Cheering and can’t wait to read more. Really fun idea and I love your style.

This was a really GREAT story, one of the best... at least until the last chapter. I HATE tear jerkers! Too bad because I won't read this story ever again. I know that's life but when I read a story I want it to leave me smiling and feeling good, not going through a box of tissues and in a funk for quite a while. I think from now on I'll have to read your last chapter before I read your story. Yes, I'm one of those that don't read a story until it's completed. Too many authors write stories and then don't finish them.

Yeah hey I’m just wondering if we’re still kk.
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A great story. Not the kind of thing I would usually read; nevertheless, I enjoyed it. I would, however, remove the adventure tag. I didn't really notice anything in the story I'd classify as an adventure.

Susan being a cock tease; thinking she could control a man through sex. How insulting. I would have told her to fuck off. Seriously, that kind of behavior would have ended the relationship for me.

Got to hand it to the author though, that is exactly the kind of bullshit I'd expect from a woman.

L'histoire est pas mal dans l'ensemble.

J'ai bien aimée à part que Susan, est trop dirigeante, autoritaire, elle ressemble parfaitement au caractère d'Hermione.

Par contre, je pense que tu as fais un peu trop vite pour qu'Harry accepte d'être toucher pour des calins ou autres, surtout qu'il a été traumatisé dans son enfance, tu l'as fais évolué trop vite, pas assez de distance faire petit à petit qu'il accepte l'amour de sa tutrice.

Bonne continuation

Thanks for sharing your work!

MaCUSA is the magical government of the US not the name of a country. MaCUSA is the Magical Congress of the United States of America. Also, many brits still call the US the colonies.

I like it so far. However, Harry is not a nickname for Henry. This is my only complaint at this time.
Harry Harold
Hank Henry