I loved this! Hope to see more!

Well done, I think you did a good job with their personalities. Personally I think there should be more critical roll fics than there are, so thanks.

This is very cute! I like how accurate your Jester and Fjord are, I think Laura and Travis couldn't really do it a lot better! :3 I'd love to read more from you!
(I really want a Critical Role category, don't you agree? :P)