Reviews for The Gray Knight
dheathking4821 chapter 9 . 7/13
Will this continue ?
dbzway23 chapter 1 . 5/29
please update soon
WeslenBR chapter 9 . 4/23
quero mais.
Moorejo chapter 7 . 4/10
THOUGH SHALL NOT QUESTIOON THE AUTHORITY OF INKO MYDORIYA!
808Joker808 chapter 9 . 3/31
Some real good stuff here
kept123 chapter 9 . 2/22
More chapters please
Guest chapter 9 . 12/31/2019
The fluff is adorable
Guest chapter 9 . 12/15/2019
PLEASE UPDATE!
Im The Person chapter 9 . 12/10/2019
Please make more of this, this is going so well and you’re telling a magnificent story!

I wonder if you’re gonna have Izuku get a lightsaber or not? I think you sorta hinted at it when Izuku asked Momo if she could create crystals, but I’m not sure. If you do end up giving him a saber, I recommend the color white, since it would match the “Gray Knight” vibe of the story.

On a side note, you should desperate your dialogue into separate paragraphs unless it’s spoken by the same person. You have it as follows:

“What is you’re name?Momo, whats yours?Izuku!”

It should be:

“What is you’re name?”

“Momo, whats yours?Izuku!”

Just keep it in mind, nice story so far, again. Hope you update soon!
erasenpai946 chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
Is Momo in those tags above why she will be Izuku's match?
Dorben chapter 5 . 11/5/2019
Not a fan of this chapter.

Not. At. All.
Mulledmead chapter 9 . 10/19/2019
while you're going through and fixing errors, you should really spend some time on this chapter. Every time a different person begins speaking you should start a new paragraph, instead of having an entire conversation in the paragraph. This helps the reader to understand more easily when someone else is speaking.
KingAllen chapter 9 . 10/9/2019
Why not you give Midoriya OFA instead before school begin you give him in the endgame ( near the end of story) or when All might reach his limit because i think Midoriya have OFA is symbolized his hero nature.
JSua chapter 9 . 10/6/2019
The fluff is amazing! Also for your dialogue, have you considered separating different character’s speeches with their own paragraphs. It makes your story run smoother where it isn’t a cluster you know.
JSua chapter 8 . 10/6/2019
Looking forward to reading more whenever you do have the chance to update.
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