Reviews for Bricks and Mortar |
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![]() ![]() Love this, looking forward to reading the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, the way it ended :)) Glad Hagrid will be ok. Hermione's dad...maybe there will be a cure for him, too. Loved the story! |
![]() ![]() Definitely need to read the sequel! I just loved the story line and how you wrote Severus's internal musings. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Severus in lime green pseudo healer robes - my brain may never recover from that image! Poor Hermione, not only is her dad ill but then she had to see Severus in those robes! Hagrid was probably the lucky one seeing as he was unconscious. If we could do proper emojis in reviews, I'd add an entire obnoxious line of those laughing-crying ones. It's not a comedy fic but you've added just enough amusement to stop it from being incredibly depressing when you think about Hermione's dad and her guilt and stress. Very nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've made it a bad habit, reading stories and neglecting to review them. But before I clicked off this story, I noticed it only had 10 reviews and I thought that was a bit ridiculous. Because this is a really well put-together one-shot. Hermione and Snape were perfectly in character and I thought the dialogue was fabulous. I know there's a sequel and I'm just on my way to devour it, but I wanted to let you know I really loved this and I'm looking forward to part 2! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was quite fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() looking forward to the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super-fun story! In a very short story you managed to weave in appearances by several beloved characters with an interesting plot and plenty of nascent plot bunnies to make for more great stories to follow! Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Verte good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, I look forward for the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I love it! I love it! Thank you so much, you've absolutely made my night 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Severus, you are a stinker! But such a fun stinker. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! And I'm really glad Hagrid came out of it alright I can't wait to read the sequel. Is Severus going to help with Hermione's father...? He's one of the greatest legilimence after all... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! Dragon pox sounds ghastly, though! I love lime green! And I look great in it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet story. |