You came DAMN close to getting it right. In fact, I think your way would have been better. At least they wouldn't get caught in the elevator right before the good part! lol

AWWWWWW

The end feels rushed
"A gallinacean push " "his spirit animal" lots of fun :)

I love just how Smooth everything is!
it was Tender and Sweet and so Comforting and Heartwarming.
I'm glad and loving it!

Great one-shot! I wish this actually happens in the manga!

I enjoyed reading it :D the suspense is so worth it xD thank you for sharing!

It's sweet and nice.
I wish the manga plot would clear such understanding this quickly but knowing that it won't I guess I have to wait till 2020 to see them together.
*wails unhappily*

now that's a hard-working trooper for the ship. I'm glad you're moving forward despite the mangaka's trope-ness and dragging attitude to the story, quite a few have taken frustrated hiatuses from the fandom.

Me encantó...demasiado PERFECTO! que le entregue el anillo !...por favor...

1. Lovely 2. I hope the white day present tooo 3.

Very cute. 8)

I loved it! It was sooooooo bo and Ren. I wished it would happen for real. It was really great. Keep up the good work.

Sweet and hilarious :)
I loved the structure, alternating POVs, very dynamic.