Great start.

I find myself very much liking how this story is starting. Looking forward to seeing how you continue.

Cute. I’d be asking if Hermione was alright too if her face was still purple, lol. I love how subtle this is. It’s not Harry suddenly falling head over heels in love with Luna, but rather a dawning realization that she’s someone that complements him. It’s sweet.

I found that they are pretty best friends, she's the friend he had when all were in their own world and in a way understand him.

Good story.