Clearly Cinder does not watch the news. Must be part of why she is so incompetent.

I’m surprised Ruby didn’t get questioned about the supposed attack and “touching” of her.

Ruby: “Sorry, but I have to bring you in despite not having an arrest warrant and rumors of your involvement only being rumors.”

I got a bad feeling about this. Great chapter.

YIPEE! You finally updated! I can't wait for my idea to be done since you said you'll do it. The one I told you about when Ruby kisses Jaune while he's in his knight armor. SQUEAL!

What are the White Fang planning?! I am curious. Hope more Jaune and Ruby interaction next chapter.

By I updated Trials In Life. Chapter 14 is up! I hope you read it...and please leave a review! It would mean so much to me. Thanks.

Thanks for the update! I've been waiting for this! Wow, the buildup for the battle is really intense! So the battle will be a clash between Shadow knight, Atlas, PNR, White Fang, and now looks like Tiga will join too! Keep up the great work! Hope you'll update again soon!

oh god I love the Tai moment lol

Better than him you say? If you think you are better than someone, it will lead to your downfall. Great chapter.

Really cute moment between Jaune and Ruby. I hope you add more moments between the two of them. Can't wait for your next update!

Thanks for the update, and great chapter! Love the moment between Jaune and Ruby, and that you made Ruby the one who unlock Jaune's aura! Jaune does look like Taiyang, wonder who Watts little test, and Pace is? Looks like Cinder knows about Ironwood arrival. Keep being awesome! Hope you'll update again soon! And good luck at your midterm!

YIPEE! You finally updated!

I will have to PM message you with more ideas or more on what I think because I don't want to spoil things we talked about in the review.

But the fact Jaune has a lot of growing enemies as the Shadow Knight. He obviously knew this would be coming. But I love Ruby's interaction with Jaune as the Shadow Knight. But I can't wait for Ruby to become more infatuated with Jaune's alter ego. Hehehehehehe

Update soon!

Thanks for the update! Poor Jaune, he has so much people targeting his back now, i bet Ren chose his bar to be the JDF main hangout so he could investigate his suspicion that Jaune is Shadow knight more easily, does Ruby suspect Jaune being the Shadow Knight too? so Shadow Knight become the new boss of Junior and his mens, at least now Shadow Knight has more subordinate to help him, wonder what Watts will do to test Sahdow Knight? Anyway great chapter! Keep being awesome, hope you'll update again soon!

The fight scene is awesome, and the bad guys are on the move, it's getting better and better. Great job.

Well im glad ur story is getting more views im happy for u. Good job of getting people hooked to ur story with all these mysteries and the way u made Romans and Neo's backstory was a good spin to make Roman character develop well. I cant wait for ur next chapters. tell then rest well and enjoy ur life peace!

Denied all you wanted Ruby, because at one point in this story you'll be more than that! And really Ironwood? Can't you think a better name?(no offense) And who the hell is that child? Great chapter.

Wait... was that a Stuart Little 2 reference?