Update anytime soon? Been looking forward to seeing this story unfold

You are not good at this.

I sorry I can't get into this story,. You are just make RWBY character's op for no reason.

If they was that strong then humanity wouldn't have died the first time by the gods,

I just can't get into Nerf dbz character's and overpowered character's that shouldn't even be strong enough hurt character's who in just a whole another level of power fanfic.

Is would make sense if the gods decided to intervene by making they creation more powerful by sending them some of they energy or have a oc old Superman Kai come to the RWBY world after the God's left ,

And was the one who recreate the humanity and teaching humanity about ki so they can training to be that strong.

I sorry but out

Kind of feels a waste that the DB characters were in the Battle of Haven but didn't DO anything in it. I mean not even having Krillin rushing in and facing off against any of Salem's dragons or Gohan actually letting his anger out and beating the holy fuck out of Hazel after the beating Ren got. But other than that, great chapter, eagerly awaiting the next. Wonder when Freeza and Salem will finally meet.

When Qrow and Goku meet I want Qrow to say "Kakarot" then Goku is like "Why do I here boss music?" and then have Broly suddenly wake up in a cold sweat going "Wha duh?"

Ouch. Just ouch. Gohan telling RNJR that he was at least a thousand times stronger than them, if he was feeling generous was probably not what they wanted to hear from a five year old. Good explanation for Ki and Aura as well. I was wondering how you were going to reconcile them. Loving this so far. I also really like the switch in POVs you keep doing, keeps the suspense going. Have you considered posting this on Spacebattles or Sufficient Velocity? I expect you'd get a great reception for this story there.

Hahaha, the scene with Bulma meeting Sun was beautifully done! I guess the opportunity was too hard to pass up. I've been enjoying this thus far. This is a cut above any other stories set in this crossover. Keep up the great work, and thanks for sharing this with us!

Awwwwe Ruby doubting herself is the saddest thing. I like when RWBY fics bring up the real reason Ozpin brought Ruby to Beacon early and Oz explaining himself. I can feel the emotion in that scene and the one with Yang with Raven.

Wait... There in The West Galaxy... the one where Paragus and Z Broly are hiding in... Oof!

I finally read all the chapters, and I'm really enjoying the story. I like the interactions and the personalities of the characters.

The powerscalling seems nice. All the "RWBY characters aren't that powerfull because they use mostly Shou-ki" thing is interesting (there's not only three elements in ki though), and I like the fact you make Ruby and the others here less powerfull than in the first version of this story. Even with your explanation it's hard to believe that any of this characters beside the gods could destroy, let's say, a city like King Piccolo. Finally, I like the possibility of the DB characters staying in the planet after everything because right now we don't have Dragon Balls.

However, I have some complains. Sometimes the story feels like "how I think RWBY should be", and DBZ characters have almost zero influence. Even Frieza's arrival doesn't seem that relevant... yet, and Goku, the only guy who can beat him and as far as we know the only guy who can increase his power level so fast that the scouters can't detect is more or less incapacitated.

But at the same time I think we are only in the beginning, so I don't see this as a real problem.

can i just say as someone who knows pretty much nothing about rwby other than stuff i've gleaned from crossover fanfic, i'm enjoying this fic a lot? i've had to skim a lot bc im gonna admit half the time im like "hm i, barely know these characters or what this means" (and i also just personally don't do well with fight scenes ;; how did i even get into dbz...) BUT.
i still really like it a lot! i especially LOVE how you write krillin and bulma, ESPECIALLY how bulma is getting to be relevant and cool like she deserves! i also like the way you balance the two power scales... it doesnt feel like dbz is being made to be UNDERPOWERED, but also rwby isn't being made completely helpless either without feeling like you're just rubberbanding them :3
i can't really add on much more commentary esp when half the time im like "well i'm only 70% sure whats going on bc i skimmed too much and dont know these guys" but i like the fic .

(also the people who are like "oh but i like it better when the rwby characters get their asses kicked instantly bc i like dbz better" ...im not even INTO rwby and that sounds boring. seriously)

Phenomenal story, I can’t wait for more, the fights are astounding and the plots spectacular. The truth to characters is also well done, plus I’m looking forward to Frieza’s next appearance.

First of all, I just wanted to say this is one of not 'THE' best DBZ and Rwby crossover I've ever read. The Characters have such good interaction, the fight scenes are Fire, and the story is so compelling. When I read that you were going to make an animation and have members from KRWBY to help out I thought you were insane! Everything about this story and you're work is inspiring and I can't imagine the amount of Free time and hard work you do to put into this masterpiece. Please keep writing your story J-Dude2470, If you have a Patron please let me know. I'm more than willing to support!

As I figured another carp story just like all rwby stories

I'm excited to see the dialogue between Vegeta, Gohan and Krillin.

God I’m loving this. All these characters click so well and your writing has been great with the fight scenes and the Ruby and Gohan interactions are literally heart melting. I know rwby crossovers are popular, but I’m glad you’re the one who’s taken up the task of meshing it with the greatness of DBZ. I hope your inspiration doesn’t falter anytime soon because this story is exactly what I was hoping for when I looked into this genre to begin with. Love it all.