It's good. Peter Parker doesn't always have to be omniverse's chew toy.

Ok. So next is the big reveal it seems.

Guess I have check this game to see how all this plays from the beginning. Good place for friends arrival.

Silly games with there stupid good people that don't kill violent criminals to stop more violent crimes. Off violent criminals and prevent the creation of damaged victims. Simple.

Predictable story, just like these types of games feature. It is what it is. Like the girls tho and Peter Parker not being an idiot.

If I play the game this may disappoint me. Fanfics should breed their own stories not retell original creators works.

Good read. Fun so far.

This is good.

you do realized Queen Opala just announced his secret identity to the world, or at the very least, Egypt

that is the most cliché title

Thanks

I like the story, well done. That said, I do also think that it could have been a lot better with more detail in all the scenes. Still, not bad. Keep up the good work with your other stories. Good luck.

Mdhunter here. Great fanfic. Loved the ending. Hope you have a great week! :)

cool

last chapter felt a bit rushed. still a good fic. hope you decide to do loqo2 someday as well