Okay we are kinda being a brat

This story was interesting, but I feel like kiyomi as a character doesn't get any development. Like all she does is whine and keep saying how she wants to get stronger but never actually do. Maybe it's just me but kiyomi is just too much of a brat. I know the author said they like the bratty type, and I personally don't mind, but kiyomi just kinda gets on my nerves. I feel like this story is going nowhere. Sorry if I offended anyone with my words.

She’s a little morally gray girl and I honestly don’t know her motivations, and I don’t really understand her personality. It’s been fun to read through and learn more about her!

Man this is a good a story. I wonder if her and Madara's relationship will approve. I like Yoshino. He's kind, which is a novelty. Will she meet Tobirama on the battlefield? Be a bit weird if her and Madara were the last ones left, too similar. Will Haruka get married? Thanks for writing!

I hope I can read the next chapter!

This story is fantastic, Very animated characters

Awww I feel bad for Kiyomi. I'm glad shes getting stronger. I really felt helpless when shes being useless at first. Jin and Takeshi arent supposed to be dead. Stupid sexist society

Um... I read your profile. It seems that you have chapter 12 ready but you didn't update. I hope you're okay.

This is amazing! I don't know why but I like the interactions between her and Madara. I guess I adore siblings familial love. I hope to read more!

I just recently started reading stories about the war clans era and I really like your story!

Not usually my cup of tea with Warting Clan era, with its focus on characters and combat (I like political stories myself). but I enjoyed it

ahhhhh nice nice

great

AHA! I have logged on...
Thank you For the chapters you have done So far!
I always thought the strenght of your old story was the chatacters. i cared about all of them and you have not only held onto what i loved but EXPANDED On it!
the trickiest part about heaven And hell(and something i liked) was that it was all from kiyomi's POV and she was an unreliable narrator... there would be moments where a reader couldn't quite figure out what happened, or when another characters personality did a total 180(Madara, Kisho..etc).
I love that you kept Kiyomi as herself but replaced a lot of the internal stuff with active dialogue, It really helps expand( and in some cases clarify) on the relationships and just adds a whole new layer to the beautiful world you have created.
Also...Loving Yoshino's mum, she is intriguing!
so all that aside thank you so much again for writing the previous story (stories) and taking the time to rewrite it so far.
I hope you continue!
I really like What you are doing so far even though I mourn my chances of reading the original through again.
oh my god Tajima! i see him in a whole new light!
hope to see more soon! take your time!

Aha! You! I have been looking everywhere for this story and its sequel silhouettes. It's one if my favourite stories ever I have been rereading this since I found it a few years back. *cries* I was so worried it was gone forever! Thank you for coming back to it even if it is for a rewrite. I haven't read this version yet but I will review when I have.( I will hopefully have figured out how to log on again on my phone)
I love this story and you for writing it! Nothing else has come close!