For the record, to everyone not enjoying the story, literally no one is forcing you to read it. If you’d rather have something jam packed with action, I make it very clear early on that this is not what my story is. There are a lot of angsty action Star Wars fics out there for you to find. Just like a lot of us write the fluff and drama for our favorite characters. My characters are all written to be flawed and confused and scarred, because they’re in the middle of a war and have grown up hurting, and not knowing better. That’s how I see them, especially in this fic universe. If you don’t like that, or something about the fic in general, I formally invite you to close the tab and never think of the fic again!

I really dislike your version of Rey. She's horrible. She's so fickle here. First she sleeps with her captor right after meeting him-like a slut. Then she also likes Poe and we can safely say they're in a relationship at this point. She plans on lying to her child about his/her father and she even plays with Poe's feelings. Honestly, she may not be sleeping around, but she's far from moral. Hell, kylo Ren is more moral than her, more honest and decent and he's a stone cold killer. Rey giving her baby Dameron's last name was the final straw-and what did he do for them according to you? He just told a lie and tried to take advantage of her situation bc he liked her. At this point, the baby drama took more than half the story and there is no Jedi/sith star wars business. If I wanted a damn soap opera, I would go and watch it, not read SW stories.

Yeah, no. She would never be with Poe. Not even if she had never met Kylo/ben. Those two had Zero chemistry, and no relationship potential. Shipping Rey with Finn I get-they were a good team in the first movie, but Poe? Never would've happened.

I like this story, it’s interesting with good storyline going on. But I can’t stand Rey.
She’s young, yes, and pregnant, so I get her position on this whole not telling Kylo about the baby, but it’s so wrong. The man wants her, he would do anything for her, and if it came down to her happiness and their child, I think he would choose her. But she’s so petty and vindictive that she can’t see that if Kylo had a reason to leave the First Order that he would take it. She has the reason in her womb but she wants to have another man claim Kylo’s child.
Yeah, that’s a guaranteed way to set this man off and have slaughter everyone, including the child, in a jealous rage. Heck, he should just kill Poe for the hell of it.
My apologies for the rant, but I can’t stand this trifling heifer at this point of the story regardless of her concerns. Heck she was going to rope Finn into her scheme had he not spoken up. That’s some trifling mess right there. Rey is low down.

Well, I am enjoying this story and I am looking forward to finishing it.

Good job.

Sean

aww cute! I'm impressed with the lengths you went to for this story! Really well done! I like the each little summary of their kid's lives. and omg so many kids XDDD. loved it!

OMG I CAN'T STOP GRINNING THEY'RE TOO CUTE! AND OMG GEMMA IS EVERYTHING!

awwww! I literally couldn't stop smiling! SO CUTE!

this story is amazing! sorry I haven't said anything sooner! i got so lost in the story! it's such a feel good story with angst and it just makes me happy overall!

Just read and loved this whole story! I don't know if you still read comments but wanted to let you know.

I enjoyed this first chapter - onward I read!

What a fantastic story! Sooooo wish Ben and Rey got their happy ending in the movies, too. Your writing is delightful!

Thats a tough question, isn’t it. But I suppose to make it easier for the child, at the moment this is the best

Gah! That was the sweetest thing. Thank you for posting! I absolutely adored every chapter.

I found this story today and just finished it! Couldnt put it down. Made me cry and laugh. Thank you!

Omg! So I just found this and read it through in like a day! I couldn't put it down! I laughed and cried! I absolutely loved it! 7 children! Force that's a lot! Lol! I loved EVERY bit if THIS! Thank you for writing it!