Nice, pretty interesting story. Cant wait for more, hopefully it’ll get updated soon

Please tell me this will be continued. I really love this story

I never understand why you guys write au's and then appologize about them being ooc. Its already ooc for them to have different teams so i dont see what your even appologizing for.

I'm ready! Lets go! I'm ready to read this, please, PLEASE finish it! (I know your just starting but...you know...please)

love the chapter

Personally i prefer canon ruby and the simple wallet she has. Carrying a purse seems like it would add too much extra weight like if she got attacked in a city it could get in the way. Just my opinion though

Lol pyrrha crushes on the first person to want to be her friend then? Interesting take, perhaps even accurate due to the life without any, though some people wouldn't be happy with that evaluation

Yeesssssss! I was super excited when I saw this was updated! I believed this chapter was a great addition to the rest, and I cannot wait until the next update!

Noice Man. Keep it up.

Interesting

This is really cute! I'm glad Pyrrha accepted Ruby's offer of friendship! You have certainly made Ruby an interesting character. Very powerful even without her semblance, which is quite the mystery. Her semblance seems to be more than slowing things down, what with increase in temperature and all that. What plans are in store for Ruby? Will Raven find her? What will happen when Yang realizes that she is Ruby? I really like this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes!

hope you continue

Well this is different, relatively amusingly different. Also, there is no Ruby could drive the metal rods into the bedposts with just force. The posts would shatter.

Good chapter.

Up to you though Ozpin more than likely knows that Tori is Ruby.

Nice sparring session.

Well it definitely shouldn’t be long before ruby reveals her true identity. She literally just told Pyrrha to “let her hair down” around her, so it would be kinda hypocritical for her to keep up a false identity for very long after this.