I WANT A UPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE~!

Bruhhh I was whining like a child there...

But really, this is really good. I really want to see what happens next.

rikusp2002.

Hey! Listen!
I know you probably don't want to continue what is and awesome concept (even if you think it is cringey) or didn't remember it, but come on! You have it in you if you can write such a good chapter and consider it cringey!

YOU CAN WRITE WELL!
YOU HAVE POTENTIAL!
YOU HAVE IMAGINATION!
AND I! NO, WE! ARE GIVING YOU HOPE AND SUPPORT!
YOU CAN DO IT EVEN IF IT SOUNDS CHEESY!

Kind regards,
A Supportive Potato.

This is excellent work. The pacing is good, the plot clear, and the writing is the right amount of descriptive. I cannot wait for more

Almost similar to that of Lack of tact's story. However i still enjoyed it FAM YEAH SHIT SHIT THIS WAS TIGHT
YEEEEEEEEEEETS
STAY CHEEKI BREEKI

Hey, hope you’re doing well!

For a chapter dedicated to exposition, this was very well done. One thing that I really liked is that you made the connection between Sayori and Kyle feel genuine, so that’s a great start in terms of your character writing. It’ll be interesting to see how you handle the other characters in the later chapters.

As for your writing... I really have nothing negative to say, it’s solid and you’re certainly a better writer than I.

Don’t worry about having a regular update schedule either, write whenever you can and always pursue quality over quantity. If possible, you could do what I’m trying to do and have a bit of a buffer (writing two or three chapters ahead) available so there’s never too long of a dry period and you won’t feel as pressured.

Well, that’s all I’ve got to say for now. Take it easy and I’ll be looking forward to the continuation of this story.