Not bad, it was beautifully well done.

Omg this is so good.. it's truly refreshing to see these guys get the closure they (especially Mikey) deserve

This came out years ago, but... it's still one of the most beautiful FNAF fics I've read. Great job :)

This was beautiful, thank you for taking the time to write this story! Genuinely got really choked up throughout it. I think Michael is a fascinating character and I’ve always loved the idea of him growing as character; from being a sadistic bully to becoming a hero, actually remorseful unlike his father. :)

It's beautiful...

THIS WAS AMAZING
the most beautiful thing I've ever read

In Ultimate Custom Night, there's some spoliers when you been caught by animatronic and they speak to you what you really are you playing as.

This was downright a euphoric and beautiful story.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. I cried, this is a awesome story. Although who is the one left behind? The mom?

I love this so much! I’m a huge fan of MatPat’s theory (which I’m pretty sure you got this from) and it was really cool to see everyone after the huge fire in FNAF six! Only the whole time I was waiting for Mother Afton to show up, if you didn’t know, Molten Freddy from FNAF 6 Is Ennard who changed himself to appear more normal for an animatronic and Ennard contains Ballora so that complete the Afton family with Springtrap (William Afton), Molten Freddy/Ennard (Ms. Afton/Ballora) Michael Afton as the character you play as, Baby with The little Afton girl, Henry of course at the speaker and Charlie as the puppet/lucky, and Crying Child’s spirt was already free so that wrapped it all up. Anyways, sorry for the long review. I really loved your story!

*PS: "didn't have a choice to but stay" should be "didn't have a choice but to stay"

PPS: Accidentally clicked "Post Review" before I was finished writing it. :P

Keep up the good work! I'm eagerly awaiting any other FNAF stories, if you choose to publish more that is, God knows this fandom has a lot of bad ones lol. Yours is like a lighthouse above a sea of bad fics.

Hey, I'm the guest that commented on the Game Theorists' theory. Finally got around to reading it and I'm impressed! I really like your characterizastions of all the dead children, especially Charlie with how mature she is (after dying first and all).

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Nice story! Thanks for making its great!

Oh my goodness this is like... this is... I honestly think Scott himself would like an ending like this

Haven't read it yet (just the author's note), but I'm glad someone is doing a story about the "Michael Afton was every night guard" theory. I too am a fan of MatPat's (The Game Theorists') FNAF theories.

PS: It's "Michael" not "Micheal". Just thought I'd let you know.