Reviews for Harry the Salvager |
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deathwearsblack chapter 8 . 6/4 great chapters. |
FrozenSneak120 chapter 8 . 6/4 Its alright we can wait especially for this amazing piece of work :) |
Synful Nocturne chapter 3 . 1/22 It's a good idea, and I really wanted to like it, but the writing style makes it difficult. Unfortunately, I keep losing my place, since each paragraph is literally a run on sentence. I'll give you props for actually having paragraphs rather than a single block of text. Having to re-read each section multiple times to figure out a sentence doesn't make for easy reading. I have up on trying about halfway through the first paragraph of chapter three. Maybe I'll give this another try in the future, but it needs some heavy editing to make it easier to read. |
Black Dragoniss chapter 7 . 1/14 oh no, Vernon has seen them. I can't wait to see what happens next. What happened to Molten Freddy? will he come back good? Oh I'm so excited |
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 7 . 12/16/2019 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 7 . 12/10/2019 Nice! |
buterflypuss chapter 7 . 12/10/2019 good chap |
SkylerHollow chapter 7 . 12/10/2019 Thanks for the chapter, glad to see you are still around. Looking forward to this story. |
EchoTheHybrid chapter 7 . 12/10/2019 DUH DUH DUUUUUH! Wonder what Vernons gonna do. Thanks for the update btw. There are so few fnaf/hp fics on here and even less good ones. If you could write another 39 fnaf/hp fics that would be great as then we'd have 100 in total (currently there are 61)! (I'm joking... maybe. Still wish there was more fics...) Any ways nice chapter! |
Jostanos chapter 7 . 12/10/2019 Omake: "The Freak did it again!" Vernon growled in anger as he drove from the pizzeria "He has all of those freaky things there with him! I TOLD HIM NOT TO.. TO..oh shiiii" SCREEEEEECH! CRASH! What may have happened to Vernon? |
Gamzeta Makara chapter 6 . 12/1/2019 Mushie will this be updated? |
EchoTheHybrid chapter 6 . 11/11/2019 Tnis is great! |
Bert159 chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 Dude, there are literally no periods. I'd like to read this because it sounds interesting but first you need to go through this and fix your grammer. |
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 6 . 8/29/2019 Nice! |
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 6 . 6/5/2019 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |