Reviews for Murmurs in the Pyramids
wiltedroses1232 chapter 2 . 12/25/2008
please continue the story i beg you i need to know if they get together again after all please please i beg you
Serenity of Paradise chapter 2 . 3/21/2006
update soon lol! I love your story it's so god!
Sam chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
That was very cute. Who new that the Seto could have that soft of a heart and the dream was just lovely.
Mrs-Hyde chapter 2 . 6/23/2004
this was a very good story. i luv how u wrote it. it touched me and thats a lot coming from me b/c most stories that i read bore me but i luved urs. keep up the awsome work and write some more. this story was very interesting.
Cherrii chapter 2 . 6/21/2004
Love you. Continue soon please!
Senket chapter 2 . 3/21/2004
I did read the prequel, but still, I'm kind of confused. Well, about the beginning... Was that before he saved Yami and they got together or after?
Kisara-Hater chapter 2 . 12/26/2003
Hate you, definately
Saggi the Dark Clown chapter 2 . 11/28/2003
Keep it up! Your story is one of the best.
Lomelindi chapter 2 . 8/10/2003
o MAN this was good! MORE MORE MORE! i need da next chapter? they gunna get back together yet or wut? :-p
aniron legolas chapter 2 . 7/16/2003
I LOVE THIS! Please continue soon!
darmithocon chapter 2 . 4/16/2003
Completing the second chorus of action in this story i have come to the conclusion that with the path u are taking i am almost postive that adding in Malik/Merick would add to the continuously changing charater realationships. If u add to the plot an extra bonus u may be able to give yr readers what they want and still be able to continue the blance or should i say the unhealthy blance between Yugi/Yami/Seto. As yr story progresses i hope that as i sugested use yr life experiences and tie it into the emontional blance that is expected in yr stories. As far as i can personally tell as a writer myself if i even had half of yr talent i would consider progressing with these skills. Personally i enjoy yr writings as far as i can tell i would enjoy reading more, if possible some of yr own. Preferabley i would love to see what yr mind could think of on yr own. Maybe i will see some soon. Just one more thing to add to this speach, is to never let anyone tell u differently about yr writing the greatest accomplishment after all is knowing what u write is great0 Hope to see more soon!
VegetasGurl chapter 2 . 4/16/2003
Cool! I hope Bakura will teach Yami how to do that. Anyways, please please please continue! Well, got to go! Ja ne!

*~VegetasGurl~*
Darmithocon chapter 1 . 4/14/2003
I thought this section was an exceptionally great sequel to Ka i hope that the second chapter that i will read with be as great. The plot on this section was esaily followed, maybe in the future u should try to add in person preferences to yr actual writing u know use yr feeling of yr life to add to the already unstable world between Yugi/Seto and Yami/Seth. I am almost sure that if u add in yr personal life u would never have a block.
Silver-Yueh chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
Cool your making more.I read KA and I really liked glad your making a Sequel.
Jadej.j chapter 2 . 4/13/2003
Hope to read more soon ;)
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