Awwww! It is so cute! Malu is one of my OTP! Thank you 3

Yo there!
Not bad, sweet little thing this is :) I'm adding it to the MaLu community ;D Oh, and if you mind, just tell me and I will take it away from the community.
Anyway, yeah, be careful of mistakes, but there aren't too many and they are easily overlooked :) I repeat, this is overly sweet! OOCness doesn't matter too much, Luffy is the usual if not a bit needy eheh, while Marco is possessive and cuddly, yay! It's cute how WB overlooks his sons, it's something that has always made me smile fondly... So, I'll check your other fic tomorrow, I'm curious!
Keep up, you're good :D See ya! ~Korazan

LOVE THIS PAIRING KYAAAAAAA!

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