Reviews for Return of Ice - Return of Fire
ClaireR89 chapter 8 . 3/14
Ever gonna update?
Marvelmyra chapter 7 . 6/23/2019
Jon should Not go to the Wall as a recruit ! Maybe Ned should send them all to Queen's Crown ? Send men and matriels there to rebuild that castle ? It is an excellent place between the Wall and Winterfell.!
Guest chapter 7 . 6/22/2019
A year and 5 months and only 7 chapters ?
Guest chapter 6 . 6/15/2019
Old Valaria had Fourty Whole Families of dragon riders ! 40 Houses and several riders in each ! That would be at the least 80 full grown dragons ! Every Targarian having a dragon is Not out of the question. But they would be a real problem to feed !
Guest chapter 2 . 6/15/2019
Cat knew that Ned never loved her, he was in fact in love with another but she allowed herself to be married to him by force ( he was forced ). What did the fool bitch expect when she married a man with every reason to hate her.? Faithfullness ? I don't think so.! She was lucky he didn't just keep Robb and send her back to Riverrun when he found out he and his brother had been lied to.! Lyanna sent messages to Riverrun that she had run away and was Not kiddnapped and had gotten married on the Isle of Faces.! I expect Balish in a fiit of anger got revenge on Brandon and Lord Tully by hiding the letter.!
Beastie chapter 5 . 5/14/2019
Good for Catelyn to snap! She has every right to be mas at Ned's selfishness and Lyanna's presumptionness. Stupid Starks have ruined her life and are too arrogant to see it.
Let's see what the fallout is.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/8/2019
The Midwife SAID that meant she...
Guest chapter 3 . 5/8/2019
The last time I SAW her... A letter arrived from Dorne on the day...
Guest chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
Cat can control herself when she wants to. And she is in a state of shock and afraid for her family. She knows she must have all the information possible to try to protect them. I worry about what her Tully arrogance might lead her to do. We all know the fool is capable of starting a war if angry and given a chance. She did kidnap Tyrion after all on just the word of Petyr Balish.! She might, may gods forbid, think that betraying her husband and Jon to gain favor and protection for her children.!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
Less busy Not less busier !
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2018
Can you please give the year Alyssa is born I know Aegon is 282 and Jon is 283 also will rhaegar meet up with his younger siblings soon I want to see them also if Aegon is alive what about rhaenys
Guest chapter 2 . 2/22/2018
Awesome story I love it so far and I am eagerly awaiting more!
francisvirus chapter 1 . 2/15/2018
good prologue
daviacostacruz chapter 1 . 2/15/2018
I wonder how angry Jon Snow will be to know that he stayed behind while the rest of the family stayed together
Aegon Potter 99 chapter 1 . 2/15/2018
Very Asoiaf starting, with the third person narrative, interesting idea, waiting for the next update.