Reviews for Becoming, Part Three
Guest chapter 13 . 1/18
Love it. Please continue!
Becci Logan chapter 13 . 7/18/2019
This story is much different than what I was expecting. But I'm really enjoying it, and I hope you continue!
mother wilson chapter 13 . 4/5/2019
ok so where is the next chapter?
Guest chapter 13 . 3/31/2019
Lol! The Buffy/Oz convo is precious. It is so perfect.
Angels-heart1 chapter 13 . 3/26/2019
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
JeanaW chapter 1 . 3/2/2019
Love it so far
Angels-heart1 chapter 12 . 2/21/2019
Great chapter, can't wait to read more!
Terrib Lee chapter 12 . 2/21/2019
Constant tense shifts, awkward dialogue, Giles lives in a townhouse/condo not an apartment/flat, and this entire chapter felt rushed.
There are other mistake, but they're superficial.

Good story regardless.
JayeMaru chapter 11 . 11/14/2018
I really enjoy this story. Thanks for the new chapter. I’m curious how the various Watchers and Angel’s different re-entry to the world will play out. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Angels-heart1 chapter 11 . 11/13/2018
Great chapter! Love that Buffy didn't have to deal with post hell Angel. Of course Oz figured out Buffy is from the future! That was perfect! Can't wait to read more!
David12leca chapter 9 . 11/10/2018
That part with faith and her fire and everything Zomgggg it was so cool i even fist pumped(such a geek)
David12leca chapter 8 . 11/10/2018
HELL YES OMFG you brought in faith in such a perfect way oh i have the happy tingles ty.
David12leca chapter 7 . 11/10/2018
That was insane i really enjoyed this one so different thats why i read fanfiction for stuff like this.
David12leca chapter 6 . 11/10/2018
nice chapter i like how its completly different then the norm but still in essence them just a little bit better.
David12leca chapter 5 . 11/10/2018
very intrigued you made me care about someone so much that had no place in the story that is a talent your a brilliant writer.
with just a small interaction i cared about that character its not often you see that and want to know more.
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