Reviews for Why am I a Squire? |
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![]() ![]() Chap 6 is a repeat of chap 4 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, an excellent chapter. Also, please work to ensure you don't burn yourself out. If you actively desire and enjoy getting out a chapter or so a week then that's all and good, but if you push yourself, you're not going to enjoy it, and you'll end up falling off all together. I do greatly enjoy this fanfic. I can't wait to see what Marco does to earn his respect from the other squires. (I'm gonna be a bit ranty here, I really hate the whole idea that canon established of Marco keeping his 16 years of experience from exploring in Heckapoo's dimension. It just seems so weird to me. Him kicking the shit out of all of the knights and squires at once seemed a little too Gary Stue for my tastes. He can be skilled and everything, what with his Karate training and the like, but it seemed to just be trying to make Marco on the level of Star and other magical beings power wise, when I always thought that it should be mostly his heart and intelligence that got him far.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder when will Marco earn their respect. Again, it's proven that he can single handedly defeat all of them in a fight, even with a handicap. Looking forward to when that happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear... |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the recent episodes, it's proven that Marco could single handedly beat up all of the squires and knights combined in the same room - while being tied up in a chair for the first few seconds. With that being said, I do hope that Marco proves his worth in a similar fashion and earn some respect. Hoping for another chapter soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a nice story, looking forward to where you will take it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder if Marco kept any skills from when he was chasing Hekapoo over the years in his adult man body. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another excellent chapter with a little bit of character progression and development. Can't wait for the next chapter. Have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Have you been inspired by Squire of The Wash? Either way good. KUTGW. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooo. New chapter. This is such an interesting fanfic, which I greatly enjoy reading. Hope next chapter doesn't take too long, have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great. I like this. Can't wait to see more. Keep up the great work. |