Noicely done. Are you going to use Jacksepticeye nicknames for the creatures?

Have faith Ruby! You can't give up that easily!

This is an interesting start.

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
She gathered some mushrooms, and copper that she had found by breaking lumps of limestone. She also got some titanium, and, after a bad experience with an explosive fish, some sulphur.

I quoted some famous phrases in my book. xD

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
She frowned and put her PDA away. "First you end up stranded on an alien planet with who-knows-what creatures on it, then you find out that-" she immediately stopped herself. She didn't want to think that. She didn't want to think of the possibility of losing her closest friends and family members. She shook her head, and then continued talking to herself out loud, cooking food and getting water with the escape pod's built in fabricator. The dark thoughts of losing everybody she loved and cared for clouded her mind, no matter how hard she tried to shake them off.

By the chalice of Jesus, Reverend hermit, what is this infernal liquor?. ;)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
Panicked screams, loud, running footsteps, flashing red lights and sirens were all filled the capital spaceship, the Aurora. People were rushing to get into escape pods as soon as possible. The ship was going down. "Warning. Abandon ship" was repeated every few seconds by a computerized female voice.

It appears that he has worked out a solution to his problem. ;P;

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
A few hours later, Ruby woke up, and looked around in panic. She was surrounded by fire. She tapped the small screen, only to hear a beep from it. She slammed her fist onto it, and it finally lifted the restraint. She picked up the fire extinguisher and put out the fire, coughing, until it was all gone.

We can't keep a sheep at home. ;)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
Goodbye everybody!

. T-T

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
It was night time. The scene was absolutely breathtaking. Everything glowed brightly in the darkness. The moonlight, making thin beams of light pierce the surface of the cool water, added to the beauty. It looked like something out of a fairy tale.

Go away!. O.o

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Now onto the actual review:
As she turned it on, she saw Booting in Emergency Mode in big letters across the screen. She rolled her eyes when, with an almost creepy, melodic computerized voice sang the name "Alterra". Ruby had heard about Alterra, and it wasn't apparently the best company in the universe.

The school authorities started to take action at their request. ;)

Well, you’ve got me hooked. Though I do have to wonder who else survived the crash. What about the rest of RWBY, or JNPR? How would the other characters tie into this?

Ooh, just thought of something! What if SSSN was on the Sunbeam? I can already inagine all the hijinks that would ensue over Neptune crash-landing on a planet that's mostly water.

Nice to see another of these being written. I'll need to do more than skim it next time, but it looks pretty decent so far.

Brilliant so far. Keep up the great work. Thanks for helping me get started on my fanfic page

This looks interesting! Keep up the good work! And when will you update Yellow Roses again? I've been waiting for the update of that story.