I do not understand this author, why start several stories if you are going to abandon them all?

Leave it to Bone Daddy to want a new toy

You want to rate something like Ophis or Great Red that can blow up a planet as weaker than a floor guardian? Jesus, looking forward to see how you manage to justify that

Dumb...they couldve just sent her to neuronist...making her a part of Nazarick is just plain idiotic

Need more chapters

Where more chapters? :(

Why no continue(

Wait, adding them to her Harem? wtf what did you do to Rias in this story? are you idiot?

Man I love the idea of your fic and the direction you are taking it but your grammar and broken English just make this so hard to read! Please get a beta!

Man, that dodgeball scene was quite disturbing, I would get it if it was human murders and monsters, but when I saw the part of a father and her daughter, it had me wondering on wtf is going on.
Did the book and the anime had that type of horror? I mean whenever someone would get killed in the anime it would be offscreen, yet people who are fans of the book or anime like Ains minions, it’s weird for me to like these characters, or that anyone who would like to make A wifu with these characters when they distrust humans.
like, take Hojo from FF7, he’s a despicable villains who did inhuman experiments on people, and quite creepy, I love the way he’s written, I love that I hate the guy, it’s a great villain character.
As for Ain’s minions, I had the impression that their monsters but not monsters like hojo. Anti-heros I guess, not like saving people, but just not wreaking havoc and psycho enjoying killing people. I just need some clarification on the appeal to these characters so that I can keep reading this crossover, I like the concepts of ains having to destroy the opposing factions, since well humans are the butt of this anime, like cannon fodder bad, and there is no consequences in having power in that world especially the devils. It’s all just names and no meaning. Like a bunch of roleplayers in a game. Again, would appreciate it if anyone can clarify for me.

LOVE this story can't wait for next chapter

Continue this was good

Great story. Couldn't stop reading it. Its LITERALLY one of the best Overlord crossovers that I've read so far.

But there are too many mistakes throughout the story that can be quite a nuisance for the readers. Do consider getting yourself a Beta or using grammarly in your upcoming chapters as it will help you avoid these typying erros.

Looking forward for when you update next.

Lots of errors though all really small so it's more of a mild annoyance. Good so far tho. Love Overlord!

Esta genial tu fanfic, hasta hace poco me a entrado el cariño a los crossover entre overlord y highschool dxd y debo decir que el tuyo es muy bueno