Reviews for The House of Bathin |
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ShadowRealmComics chapter 1 . 1/25/2019 Hmmm, interesting twist. I cannot wait to see how this story unfolds. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2018 Not a bad chapter |
Paver83 chapter 1 . 2/21/2018 I was not able to follow the fight at all. Ron is Fury? Or is it the red head? Who was happy the red head showed up? I thought Ron was winning the fight easily, but he was badly hurt? What is a rider? I can't even tell which side the red head was on. Who was armed with a whip? The fight seemed to be intended to introduce the protagonist and antagonist, but it only served to confuse me. I honestly think a re-write is needed. I think you need to add more information in some way; I, for one, am not familiar with High School DxD other than from other cross-overs. |
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 2/21/2018 What is "Darksiders"? |
eckles chapter 1 . 2/21/2018 Nice start ... lets see what happens from here :) |