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Noooooo! My little cinnamon roll!

I love. I love I love I love. I love what you’ve done with Chloe. I love the emotion. I love.

Can't wait for the next update! I'm really enjoying this

Damn, this is awesome ;D

I didn't think it was bad at all! You have very good use of adjectives and how you word things.

hmmmm...I can see a little why this was difficult. On one hand chat noir being out could possibly bring out ladybug/marinette and you did plant a good hint for why mari would be suspicious...however ladybug being there felt a little to convenient, especially since she wasn't letting him explain the whole thing or what hi fiends had assumed nor gave him any more excuses to use. and since they hadn't used their abilities the beeping felt a little too convenient since we know they only need to transform after using their special power. if they don't use it then they don't have to detransform and the ladybug part didn't really help Adrien all that much or change things. and its less believable since while he had run off first mai was most likely still stuck with the group.

the response to Adrien running off and uncharacteristically, from mari and others perspective, getting really mad at them is either they run after him and lose him during the chase and they either stand around and discuss their thoughts and what to do or they look around with him more. they aren't as familiar with the area so them breaking into one on one groups is unlikely so mari being able to get away feels less likely. Plus mari gets bit of tunnel vision when it comes to Adrien and if she did transform than she'd at least ask if chat has seen a running blonde boy or Adrien agreste around since Adrien was obviously distressed when he left.

The best parts of what you wrote was when he was sulking by himself and his interaction with Chloe. I loved how angry Adrien was they'd accused his dad of hurting him. I like that he was trying to calm himself down by seeing fom their perspective and that they were just being concerned friends and they meant well but he has the rright to be pissed because they weren't listening to him and would believe him and kept believing the worst of his dad. which is understandably something he'd be mad at because his dad is notoriously over protective and his dad is innocent and they thought so badly of someone Adrien loves would piss Adrien off.

We know Adren does have a tendency to run off his feelings like he did during Christmas so that's believable but if their hasn't been a bigger ruckus to draw the eye I don't think mari and friends would have noticed chat noir since the person they are looking for is on the ground.

you could have him run off till he trips or gets to emotionally panicked o shaking from emotions he is digging his claws into a wall or he just stops and retransforms once he thinks he is far enough away. lots of people I know when pissed or sees a injustice tend to mutter or think about it alot making themselves go in circles through anger, sadness, panic, disbelieve and talking themselves through the situation. you had a believable part where he was trying to convince himself that they meant well but you could have him mentally add a but or get more upset the more he thinks about everyones accusations, especially marinettes who we know Adrien thinks vey highly of. or maybe he feels defensive since marinette was trying to judge his dad but she literally has the perfect pair of parents and comparing his dad to them isn't exactly fair and maybe he could mention to himself they should know better since his dad is very over protective at times.

and or Adrien could detransform while still shaking with emotions just for him to talk and cy to plagg and ask plagg for advice so you can still use part of that crying scene you wrote so well. that way you can put in the Adren plagg dynamic. plagg ho turns Adrien into chat noir which is one of the reasons Adrien has scars could put in his two sense and I think plagg could do well to help validate Adrien's emotions and try to help Adrien and is someone Adrien feels comfortable opening up to.

we could see how plagg responds to Adrien thinking he messed up o help trying to come up with some lies for Adrien. that way when Adrien finally starts calming down and starts going back meeting one of his human friends has more impact and it shows he has other people to talk to than ladybug. and if ladybug wasn't aware f him having that many sca before that means chat hadn't told ladybug o that she didn't ask and assumed it was about the same level as her, so I don't think chat would want to tell ladybug ight now. especially since the reason he is upset has less to do with the cars and more that everyone assumed his dad was hurting him.

Chloe knows and trusts Adrien and parkoring isn't a full lie and I like that Adrien was able to come up with one around Chloe however since ladybug hadn't really helped him with that idea the ladybug part isn't as nessacary. like hat Adrien was able to prove it to Chloe and chloe believed him after his proof. considering chloe is his oldest friend and found out separately from everyone else and he had more time to think I like him having a better excuse.
I like that everyone else was still assuming they were right when he came back and it was kindof cute that Chloe acted like she knew all along he was parkouring and they were oblivious for not knowing. maybe have them ask why Adrien hadn't just said so or kept is secret?

Mari knows Adrien's sceduale by heart and his dad is strict so it would make sense if mari was stll suspicious. o if Adrien showed his parkou maybe a small part of something nagged at mari that she couldn't name. and we know mari can be very very stubborn. she is also clumsy so she knows what accidental scars verses attack scars look like by this point and Adrien isn't the best liar. add that mari has a difficult time changing her mind when she has a idea in her head. make it a little more subtle to why mari is suspicious. and Adrien is still mad at them for assuming about his dad and they aren't used to mad Adrien. maybe show tht backbone he uses to call out ladybug sometimes is still there and then his friend can apologize. and Alya as a reporter has made jumping to conclusions a thing when she thought chloe was ladybug and it could embarrass her that she jumped again with very little proof. o since Alya is suspicious maybe Alya would wonder why Adrien would hide parkouring from them and want to see a example as well. maybe Adrien could mention that is how he snuck out of his room at chistmas

Oh my god I love this! You’re a great writer, and this story has excellent potential! Pleases please please update soon!

Please continue!

Hee! I love that Chloe has his back in this.

I really love how you wrote everyone and especially how you wrote Chloé! Please update I’d love to read more!

This is great and Marinette, Adrien "can say that, it's the same thing" I am guessing her scars are from akumas to.
Please continue and update again soon.

I like seeing mari a bit judgmemtal as well and adrien getting enraged about them accusing his dad with no proof and pushing him. Its interesting to see chloe being a bit of the understanding one for once

Please continue this story I really love it

Hello, I really liked your story and I would like to get your permission to translate it. Of course, I will point you as the author and leave a link to your work. With respect Amurkon