Aww, that was really sweet. Thank you for writing this story.

Can you make a fanfic regarding the relationship between Batman and Avesta (not in romantic way, but a respectful, allied relationship). I also think you should have it that she doesn't know that Bruce is Batman, I felt that idea was unneeded; I prefer it if she doesn't know. She has gained some attention, but not a lot, and I feel she's an interesting character to explore. Your fanfic could depict her first learning about Batman, why she admires him, and depict the scenes where they are with each other, but also add in your own conversations. You can still copy word for word from the games, but you can also add in your own scenes, like Batman having more scenes with Avesta after she goes deaf (something that never happens in the game), and possibly quietly meeting her at the hospital, and more hugs between the two (I just love compassionate Bruce). In fact, you could make it like she is still affected.

Ugh, I love this! You captured their voices really well. Super sweet.

Oh my gosh, Alfred ! XD
Thank you for this story ! This was an interesting and cute continuation of that scene (something I'd have loved to see in-game) !
I'd have loved to see Alfred and John's first meeting, as well as Alfred's reaction concerning Bruce. I'd just have loved that this story be longer X)

Ahh this is so lovely there really aren't enough Telltale fics out there, I hope you keep writing! Good job!