Please finish!

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! I have fallen HEAD OVER HEELS for this story and can't stop reading it! When Jack gets injured and the other Guardians find out, I love how you bring out the gentle caring side of each of the them. I especially love the protective older brotherly nature of Bunny, and the defensive motherly side of Tooth. Both EXCELLENTLY done by the way!:) I don't know how old this story is or if you still even like Rise of the Guardians, but I'm begging you... PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!

This is really good. I am excited to see lady lucks punishment!

You should make breaks in the text every time you change scenes. Otherwise it is a little confusing. You're doing great!

Well I'm glad they've pieced together the culprit. I'm curious to see what happens next. Great work.

I really like this. Update soon. JACK AND BUNNY BROTHERLY LOVE!

Do you think Mother Nature will make an earthquake or a flash flood-just to find Lady Luck?

(Considering how ticked she is right now, I wouldn't put it past her.) Hell hath no fury like a woman scorn, as the saying goes. If a mother bear (or wolf) with cubs is dangerous, then a Spirit Queen is at least three times worse.

You know what I love the most...
The fact that Mother Nature knew Aster knew and how he refused to tell her..
I'm wondering what would have happened if each of them went alone..:)

Well it was fun seeing North nervous. I love protective momma bear mode from Mother Nature. I'm glad to see Bunny had a good reason for not going after Luck. I'm curious to see what Karma thinks of the situation. Good job. I'm looking forward to next time.

Lady Luck and Karma?

That's either a good thing or a bad thing.

(Karma can consider herself lucky (pardon the pun) that she didn't enrage Mother Nature...this time around.) (Karma might be an annoyance to Mother Nature, considering humans have her for a saying for moments that a bully gets whats coming to them or when someone does a good deed and gets rewarded for it, sooner or later.) (*Do you think Karma knows what's coming to Lady Luck...?*)

It sounds like Mother Nature has had a few headaches with her Winter Spite when he spread winter like he's supposed to.

Well I think Bunny handled the situation pretty well. I love how Jamie was more concerned about Jack than anything else and I thought it was sweet of the other children to cover for him. I like how Cupcake was the only one to ask the important question though. It was hilarious watching the guardians strategize how to tell Mother Nature. I was glad Jack was doing alright until the drama picked up again. I'm glad to see there's still plenty of dramatic moments left. Great work. I'm looking forward to next time.

Yerp, an OC Mother Nature. Pshh, oh well xD And hmmm, Karma too eh? Can't wait to see her relationship with Jack!

If Jack is dead, then Lady Luck will have to deal with a very ticked off Mother Nature.

Since she governs 4 seasons and not 3, Mother Nature is probably going to show less mercy than MIM...if I'm right about this.

Omg, please tell me you'll use the GoC Mother Nature! Man shnoodlles, this chapter rocked!

Wow. I like you take on the idea of spirits taking revenge in Jack. I thought the distress signal was an interesting touch. I'm curious to find out what Lady Luck will have to say when Bunny hunts her down. Poor Jamie. Hopefully Bunny will help him get through his trauma. I liked the drama moment where Jack stopped breathing and then started again. Hopefully Tooth and North get him back on his feet. Great work. I'm looking forward to next time.