| Reviews for Fate: Player Online |
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  Tetho chapter 22 . 5/14 Oh boi, I can't wait for Miyu to go full Onii-chan on Shirou now! |
| Tetho chapter 10 . 5/14 Oh no, it's Julian! Keep your imoutos safe and away from his Shi-chan! |
 Jestersky98 chapter 9 . 3/1 This is the single worst story I’ve ever read if this mangled mess could even classify as a proper story that is |
| Paxloria chapter 7 . 11/21/2019 Umm, Kiritsugu just DIED you know. Isn't everyone over that just a bit too easily? Furthermore, shouldn't they all be angrier at Jubstachait? If he had changed his mind sooner Kiritsugu would still be alive & there with them! |
| Paxloria chapter 6 . 11/21/2019 Umm... Shouldn't they be trying to get as far away from Einzburn territory as possible? how could they NOT have been caught by now? |
| Paxloria chapter 5 . 11/21/2019 Where was Acht during this? There's no way he was beat by Kiritsugu or failed to notice that monster, so where is HE at this time? |
| Paxloria chapter 1 . 11/21/2019 Don't know why, but this looks REALLY familiar to another story... With the same name and same cover. Could it be that the story this story reminds me of is also this story? I feel like that's not the case but it's still possible that could be true... |
| darick.klomp chapter 4 . 11/15/2019 Hey the part where they confront Jubstacheit. The statement "stared with renowned hatred" does not make sense. A simple he glared at the man before him would work just fine. |
| GaRage Fixcion chapter 27 . 11/4/2019 This is just dumb. Zelretch was a true magician. It was already an establish fact that true magician was much stronger than Servant, yet he lose against Avenger? Unlikely. |
| FriggleBerry chapter 9 . 10/22/2019 I’m super confused the timeline here is hella fucky is shirou a child still or are we talkin like just before the grail war like wtf is going on |
| MysticRising chapter 7 . 9/8/2019 This is progressing well (im on ch 7) but ill say that end bit is annoying. It feels like a third of the story is commentary and makes the whole thing feel short. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/1/2019 And you’ve ruined this story for me, why in gods green earth did you have to add an OC? Not reading anymore than this, goodbye. |
| creativesm75 chapter 85 . 8/15/2019 cool |
| Kira007Goddess of Chaos chapter 13 . 8/9/2019 Please be more careful with the timeline. At first you said it was a 3 years timeskip and now you said its been 10 years since Fuyuki fire. ? |
| Ruberforumfree chapter 5 . 8/6/2019 ... what with this "strongest being in the whole universe" bullshit? he's not even a TYPE! One shot fro excalibur could kill him completely. |
