Reviews for Picnic
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
...this was a confusing read. I'm thinking you're using tf names but it's not actually transformers? can't see how it would be with meat, leaf and berry eating robots and flying praxians. Good as an original story, just strange that to find it posted under tf. :-)
Vela513 chapter 1 . 5/17/2018
I definitely needed summer sunshine and warmth! This was gorgeous, thank you! I can just smell the grass from here, wow!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
I love it! especially the first paragraph. that was funny.