Oh, this is going to be a blast. Urobosa is going to be fun in this one! Though I'm fascinated by Zelda, you're really sticking close to what the game told us, so will you take her character in a new direction.

I'm glad Mipha is being bold right now.

Great chapter! Will this be a novelization of pre-calamity, or will something diverge from the main story?

If you wanna have the champions beat the blights, I have a couple ideas to make them stronger (specifically Mipha, but others as well)

Hope you get power back soonlooking forward to chapter 2

Yup, it definitely is the perfect writing material, completely agree. Hope you keep this up, because it's shaping up to be pretty interesting.

Great start! I snorted when Mipha called Revali Ravioli XD

And I do love Mipha x link, so that's a bonus.

Only small problem I have is seggin is black, is he not? Unless his red fade into black with age?

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